Writers, when using description, often forget that the purpose is to create a mental picture for the reader and not to have words overwhelm that function. Often words overwhelm this function as the writer uses it to show their love of words for their own sake.

Description should not be secondary to word choice; it should serve its primary reason: to create a mental picture. Only when it creates the desired mental picture is it effective.

Some writers use description to show their erudition, their knowledge of words, their vocabulary, and ability. When words intrude upon this function, then they tend to decorate rather than illuminate. Thus a writer must be ever vigilant that one does not befuddle the reader with an obtuse choice of words. The old adage, Keep It Simple Stupid, is worthwhile to consider. All the best writers adhere to that rule so their descriptions are clear, exact, and effective.

Some writers feel that description must overwhelm the senses when in reality they should use them to draw the reader into the scene, the atmosphere, and the mood that the writer is trying to create. It must be done subtly, cunningly, and unobtrusively, making sure that the words do not draw undue attention to passage.

Words should not be used to decorate.

Charles O. Goulet has a BA in history and a BEd in English literature so he writes historical novels, most based on Canadian history. He may be contacted at:

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