Reviewing New Writers
New writers are very vulnerable and need to be handled gently,
but not with kid-gloves. Keeping a friendly tone is very
important for the reviewer. Because we are working online, we
can't see each others faces or body language. You may slip into
a tone that sounds arrogant and bossy to the author, but is
completely opposite your intention; especially if there are a
lot of errors or suggestions to make, and the reading wasn't
easy. Your mood will show through. It isn't easy to give
constructive suggestions and avoid destruction of self-esteem
with the same comments. It's always good to sum up your comments
with a few friendly words of encouragement, and always, always
point out the good stuff!
Pointing out every technical error or element issue in one
review can be overwhelming to new writers and the reviewer. The
ideal way is to work with them step-by-step. Small writing
groups are helpful for this.
As a reader/reviewer of novice writers, I try to look past the
spelling errors for the story hidden within. Knowing the author
likes what he wrote, my job is to help him see how a few changes
may make it better. Sometimes it's impossible and I advise him
to correct the spelling and I'll try again.
#a side note: I think those who advise against editing until the
story is finished must not be active readers or reviewers of
novice writers. Proofreading and spell checks should be done
before posting for reviews.
True self-esteem can only be built on truth. When someone has
truly accomplished something good from a bad first draft,
they'll know; they can feel it, and will be justly proud. To
avoid hurting a writer's feelings, especially a young writer,
you may be tempted to tell them their work is well written, when
it wasn't. Leave that to their family and friends, it's their
job. The writer joined a writing site in order to learn how to
write; don't deny him that opportunity or the pride of
accomplishment. Any item can be improved with honest reviews if
the writer wants to work at it. Never rewrite it for him, it
will no longer be his work and he will trash it. I would.
Reviewing honestly is an integral part of writing - and it's
difficult to do. Reviewers can get a reputation of being unfair.
This is a valid concern, and I too, have it. Remain aware of
your tone and always encourage, it will do you both good.