Your Fundraising Letter P.S.: 10 Ways to Write Powerful
Postscripts.
Your postscript is one of the most important parts of your
fundraising letter. It usually stresses the point of your letter
and asks for action. Some donors read it first. Some
professional writers write it first.
Since the P.S. is one part of your letter that you can be
confident your donors will read, you need to write something
there that will motivate donors to send you a gift or take your
desired action.
A donor reading a P.S. is a donor looking for information. And
that's your opportunity. So don't treat your postscript as an
afterthought. Here are some ideas to get you started on
finishing your letter.
1. SHOW WHAT A DONATION "BUYS"
"Remember, your gift of just $25.18 will provide a hot supper
every day for a week. Please give today."
2. MAKE YOUR DONOR MAD (AT THE PROBLEM YOU SOLVE)
"I've included a rather sad photo of a giant panda--a mother
who'd been nursing her new baby--who was killed by poachers.
Take a look. Then give some gift, of any amount, to stop tragic
panda deaths and help save these harmless and wonderful animals.
I am waiting to hear from you."
3. MENTION YOUR FRONT-END PREMIUM
"By the way, the enclosed 2006 calendar is a gift of thanks for
your support this year, and your continued support next year."
4. MENTION YOUR DEADLINE
"We must have your responses to the enclosed National Survey in
our hands within 10 days. Please complete and return it to us in
the enclosed postpaid envelope provided. If you'd like to join
the Rails to Trails Conservancy, simply mark the appropriate box
on the Survey form and mail it with your check in the enclosed
envelope."
5. SUGGEST A LARGER GIFT
"Your last gift was $250. If you could match it again (or even
increase it a little), I'd be mighty grateful to you."
6. DRAW ATTENTION TO AN IMPORTANT ENCLOSURE
"I've included with this letter an article about our response to
the recent gang violence. Your support right now is critical to
our work in this campaign. Many thanks."
7. INVITE YOUR DONOR TO TAKE ACTION
"If a loved one or friend of yours is addicted to drugs or
alcohol, please call 123 456-7891. Because of your financial
support, we're here to offer advice, help and professional
direction to those in need."
8. STRESS THE URGENCY OF YOUR APPEAL
"Tens of thousands of Angolans are at risk right now of starving
to death. We are already in the country helping, but we can only
do more if we receive more funds. Please help the people of
Angola. Send us a gift right now."
9. SHOW WHAT HAPPENS IF THE DONOR FAILS TO ACT
"I need to send this shipment of clothing to Liberia within 10
days or we will miss this opportunity. I am counting on you,
Alan, to help us right now with a gift of $50 or more."
10. ASK A QUESTION
"Do you know that our scholarships are supported entirely by
charitable donations? The Foundation does not receive any
funding from government, Sharelife or Catholic Charities of the
Archdiocese of Toronto. Please give generously to our Hope for
Children Foundation Scholarship Fund today."