What Is A Plot?
Understanding what a plot is creates a foundation for an ability
to create one. Unfortunately for most writers, they are consumed
with the idea of creating the effect of what a plot does without
first understanding what a plot is. What a plot does is raise
dramatic questions a reader or viewer will follow a story to its
conclusion to get answers. What a plot is is the process of
generating questions around the outcome of a story's dramatic
purpose that gives a story a dramatic shape and outcome
fulfilling to an audience.
Romeo and Juliet is an example of a well-crafted plot. By loving
each other in spite of the mutual hatred of their families,
Romeo and Juliet set the story in motion. But it is the story's
plot that makes the story's movement toward its fulfillment
dramatic. By raising up the obstacles that block the love of
Romeo and Juliet fulfilling itself, the story's plot makes the
lover's plight more dramatic. Even knowing the story's outcome,
the action of its plot -- moment by moment -- generates for the
story's audience a dramatic experience of the power of a love
that will not be denied.
In any story, as characters act to achieve goals, the actions of
such characters should advance the story toward its resolution
and fulfillment. Because other characters are driven to shape a
story's dramatic purpose to their design, they are naturally in
opposition. As different characters act and block each other,
they generate new obstacles to each others progress. This
escalates the drama over character goals, scenes and the story's
outcome. A plot operates around the effect of making a story's
movement toward resolution and fulfillment dramatic. The catch
is that it's only when a story is in motion that it has a
movement to block. Without this quality of dramatic tension
generated by a plot around a story's movement, a story appears
to be a collection of incidents. The incidents may be dramatic
individually, but collectively they fail to engage the interest
of an audience. They fail because they lack a discernible
purpose that arises out of resolving a story's dramatic purpose.
The key here is to understand that to describe a story about
love is not to describe its plot. A story is about an issue of
human need. A plot is what makes that issue acted out to
resolution and fulfillment dramatic. To create a great plot
about love is to turn what might appear to be a worn story idea,
two teenagers in love, into Romeo and Juliet.
To illustrate how a plot grows from a story's premise, consider
the novel The Hunt For Red October. On the surface, it appears
to be a plot-driven thriller about a Lithuanian-descended
commander of a Russian nuclear submarine attempting to flee to
America and freedom. On a story level, however, it is about a
battle between freedom and authoritarianism. This is laid out in
the story's premise, The courage to battle oppression leads to
freedom. Because readers desire to experience that state where
the values of freedom win out over oppression, they readily
internalize this story's movement. Because the story in its
every action proved its premise, it drew in readers. Its highly
praised plot succeeded because it made the underlying conflict
of the story, freedom battling oppression, clear and dramatic.
It moved its audience.
Its plot operated to make that movement dramatic.
When every character's actions revolve around a story's core
dramatic issue, the actions of each character affect every other
character. A well-designed plot ensures those premise-generated
actions increase the drama around the story's course and
outcome. That makes the story's journey to its ultimate
destination more potent.
Tom Clancy succeeded in creating a great plot because he
understood how to create a plot that manifested the movement of
his story. Every character, situation, and action grew out of
his story's promise and existed in the world it created. Since
the story of The Hunt For Red October concerns freedom battling
oppression, the story's plot made visible and concrete the
playing out of that deeper level of story. To the extent a
reader feels emotionally or thoughtfully connected to this
story, they are engaged by its plot.
As the story of Hunt is clearly and powerfully presented, the
readers sees/feels/experiences how the freedom they identify
with battles the oppression they dislike/hate/want to see
vanquished. That is why so many people had to read to the end of
the book to get that story question answered: Will Ramius make
it to America and freedom?
They had been hooked on a deeper, emotional level. They had been
led to care about the outcome. It was important to their own
state of emotions, their own sense of what was right and just,
their own sense of mattering.
Engaging the interest of an audience around an issue of human
need invests them in the story's outcome. They want to know how
it will turn out. They have to know how it will turn out.
When someone has to finish your story to see how it turns out,
your plot has fulfilled its purpose.
The writer who doesn't see the connection between a story, its
characters, and plot risks introducing characters or plot
devices that confuse what's at stake in the story. That confuses
a reader's emotional response/desire to pursue the story's
journey of feelings, thoughts and sense impressions.
The answer for the struggling writer is to see that a plot is
generated by a strong, well-realized story. It is not a
substitute for a story. Setting up a situation common to action
films, "Who's going to get out of here alive," is plot-like.
Lacking a story issue, however, such films struggle to engage a
wide audience.
To create a great plot, start with your story promise.
Understand how what's at stake in your story raises questions to
which your audience desires answers. Understand that your plot
should make the journey to get those answers potent and
dramatic. When you start to write, be clear about the obstacles
that block the movement of your story. How those obstacles force
your characters to act with ever greater determination if they
would shape the outcome of your story's outcome.
That's when you'll be told, "Wow! Loved your plot! How did you
think of it?"