Gimme a Break!
Remember, when you write your sales copy, that you are not a
lecturer and your potential customer is not the audience.
The three required building blocks of great sales copy are
Introducing the product, Arguing why it is the best value or
quality, and Proving your substantiations. This is a fact that
will greatly increase the selling efficiency of any marketer who
is clever enough to see the force of it. Everybody wants to know
what they're buying, and there is a certain art to persuading
them to conclude that yours is the product that they need. You
need to mesmerize them with your lead in, introducing the answer
to their problem. Offer the arguments that are already clicking
in their head, and show them the proof that substantiates your
argument.
Too much information puts your potential client in the position
of boredom and frustration. Don't talk them to Death, with too
much data when making your sales pitch. Your are not in the
business of writing a biography of your product and yourself (or
the owner of the product), you are in the business of making the
sale.
Say it once, Say it clear and Move on!
How many times do I have to hear about how your product does
this or does that? Am I such a complete moron that I can't
remember it from one paragraph to the next? I can't tell you how
much I hate having to tread through countless piles of
advertising manure telling me the same thing over and over, only
changing the words.
Pat yourself on the back, on your own time!
That's how I feel when I visit a site looking for the
information on their product. When I come across page after page
of literature that often covers everything from the
manufacturer's educational background and family life, to a full
page (even pages) of testimonials, I start gasping for air. Time
to escape!
If the educational background or being from a family lifestyle
is crucial to the credibility and quality of the product, keep
it short and sweet. Otherwise, get off of it! I Don't Care!
Testimonial Overkill.
Recently, I was looking at a marketing program and by the time I
got halfway through the testimonials, I had already had enough.
So it was click and goodbye. Testimonials are an intricate part
of sales, however you rarely need a full page of them to get the
message across. Pick a few of your best, (preferably short)
testimonials and use those. Set up a specific page for all of
them, and give the reader the option of viewing them via a link.
There's nothing earth shattering here, but considering the
amount of times in the last few days, I had to wear my waders to
bear yet another barrage of advertising refuge, I just had to
write something down.
So, try for the sake of your readers and your sales margin to
keep it Strong, Simple and To The Point!